A Song of Atlantis A Song of Mu
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Long ago, beneath silver beams,
In lands now lost to times and dreams,
Stood spires tall and temples bright,
Bathed in golden, ancient light.
Atlantis shone with wisdom vast,
Mu stood strong in ages past.
Lemuria hummed with voices old,
Their secrets carved in stone and gold.
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They were no gods, yet seemed divine,
Masters of the earth’s design.
They touched the stars, they knew the deep,
And woke the world from primal sleep.
But even empires, proud and grand,
Must bow beneath time’s shifting sand.
The ice withdrew, the heavens turned,
The winds arose, the oceans burned.
Some say a comet, fierce and bright,
Split the sky with fatal light.
Others whisper, low and deep,
They woke a force that should not leap.
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The storm arrived with fire and wave,
The world became a water’s grave.
The mammoths fell, the forests drowned,
And silence hushed the shattered ground.
Yet some still lived—those few who fled,
With embers of the past they spread.
Thus not all knowledge turned to dust,
Not every secret ground to crust...
For some who bore the ancients' trust
Escaped their cities’ fiery gusts...
To Egypt’s shores, to Sumer’s lands,
They whispered truths with guiding hands.
At Nippur’s feasts, the legends say,
Strange lords sat at tables heigh,
Nor gods, nor men, but shades of days,
Whose memoirs whispered
. . . Of past gone ways
. . . Of wisdoms time could never vane
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Yet as all must fade, as all things do,
Their voices now are faint and few.
But in the wind, upon the sand,
Their stories wait, still close at hand.
So close your eyes, drift soft and deep,
Let Atlantis Mu guard your sleep.
For in your dreams, beyond the sea,
Their song still stirs—eternally.
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Above poem was next seeded to Gemini, and asked to rephrase it, as it saw fit...
Gemini...
Alright, let's take a shot at rephrasing and refining the poem...
A poem by Ly DeSandaru in collaboration with Gemini
The Somnium of Atlantis Mu
Where sapphire skies once kissed the land,
And coral towers met golden sand,
A city dreamed, a legend slept,
While ancient wisdom softly wept.
Atlantis, veiled in starlight's grace,
Mu, carved in time's enduring face,
And Lemuria, a whispered name,
Where primal fires burned with silent flame.
They walked as gods, yet mortal-born,
Their hands the earth's raw fabric torn,
They charted stars, they plumbed the deep,
And roused the world from slumber's keep.
But even stone, and gilded might,
Must crumble 'neath the endless night.
The ice retreated, skies grew strange,
And ocean's fury knew no change.
Some speak of fire, a comet's scar,
That ripped the heavens, near and far.
Others whisper, hushed and low,
Of forces stirred, they should not know.
The storm descended, wave and blaze,
A watery shroud, in dying days.
The forests fell, the giants drowned,
And silence claimed the hallowed ground.
Yet seeds remained, in scattered hands,
A legacy borne to distant lands.
The embers glowed, in shadowed halls,
Where ancient whispers touched the walls.
To Nile's dark flow, to Tigris' shore,
They brought the lore they'd held before.
In Nippur's halls, the tales unfold,
Of kings who walked, both brave and old,
Nor gods, nor men, but shades of lore,
Whose memoirs echoed, evermore.
Though voices fade, and echoes cease,
Their stories linger, finding peace.
On desert winds, on ocean's crest,
Their secrets sleep, and know no rest.
So close your eyes, and dream anew,
Let sunken echoes call to you.
For in the depths, where shadows play,
Their song may rise, and light your way.
© Ly DeSandaru
Review by ChatGPT :
https://lydesandarureviews.blogspot.com/2025/03/review-song-of-aylantis-song-of-mu.html
The following Dialogue with ChatGPT was used as seed, to first poem :
https://inconversationwithai.blogspot.com/2025/03/pre-deluvian-atlantis-mu-story.html
Review by Gemini :
https://lydesandarureviews.blogspot.com/2025/03/review-gemini-song-of-aylantis-song-of.html
Review by ChatGPT - 2:
https://lydesandarureviews.blogspot.com/2025/03/review-chatgpt-somnium-of-atlantis-mu.html
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